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BOOK ONE

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I'm not who you think I am. That's the first thing you should know about me.

For example, I met Valentine on Valentine's Day, which is why I call him Valentine. It isn't because I'm some asshole making fun of a guy who could never get a girlfriend. I'd be the last person to make fun of a guy without a girlfriend; I've never had one in my life, nor do I want one, to be honest. I called the kid Valentine because, when I first met him, he refused to speak aloud, and I couldn't understand sign language. It was a simple matter of communicative difficulty. And could I help it if, even after we learned to communicate, he got attached to the name and insisted all his teachers use it? No. Not my fault. It's a good name, anyway. I don't know why everyone says I gave it to him out of spite.

So you see, not everything you've heard about me is true. I mean some of it is, in a twisted sort of way. I admit my social skills leave something to be desired, but I've always done my best to be friendly. I remember my first caseworker used to say, "You have to be a friend to have a friend." I get it, and I tried that. But here's the thing I learned about friends: they will destroy you. You know that tower of peace and solitude you built for yourself? You know the identity you carved out all on your own, with your own blood, sweat, and fierce cosmic questioning? They'll rip it to shreds in a heartbeat. I'm not kidding. They'll rip it to shreds and they'll spit on it and dance on it, and then they'll ask you to show them mercy when you finally snap. But don't you dare give in. The moment you do, I promise you, they'll gather all the leftover pieces of you into a pile and show you just how combustible you are.
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Check Chemistry's webpage for updates on the book.

Read the next part.


This is a short, introductory scene for my novel Chemistry. Chemistry is a contemporary, YA retelling of Victor Hugo's classic, The Hunchback of Notre Dame, from the perspective of the story's antagonist Claude Frollo.

I will be posting more chapters from this novel, pretty regularly. I hope you enjoy them! Watch me for updates. :D

Edited to add: I think my descriptions should include fun facts about my choices and parallels with the original novel. So, here I changed Quasimodo's name to Valentine because more people celebrate and are familiar with Valentine's Day than Quasimodo Sunday, the holiday Quasimodo was originally named for. Claude Frollo did not (as is commonly believed) name him Quasimodo as an insult.
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:iconshyanne-kai:
It's good that you've done a lot of research, I'm not very familiar with The Hunchback of Notre Dame, so this is going to be interesting. You certainly have a very strong narrator.
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~juniorel Sep 14, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed the introduction to Chemistry. I do want to give you fair warning, though. I've already begone storing chapters for publication, so if you find some missing, that's why. BUT as soon as I publish the ebook, I'll do a free event so you can download the whole thing, if you like. I'll most likely announce it in my journal, so it won't be a surprise.

Thanks again for the encouraging comment! :hug:
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:iconshyanne-kai:
No problem, I look forward to downloading it! Just one question: will I need an ebook to download it, or can I do it for my computer, as I don't own one?
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~juniorel Sep 15, 2012   Writer
All you have to do is download this free application and you can totally read it on your computer or phone or whatever. So yeah, keep an eye on my journal and I'll tell you when the free event is. It won't be indefinite as I'm only allowed to do a few days, but I'll give ya warning about it.
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sorry I've been off line for about 3 months so I was not able to review this till now. But all in all I am very excited to see where this novel is going to go!!
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~juniorel May 22, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy it. :)
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~crazyBookworm013 Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though I haven't read the book, I do know the general plot of the disney movie. But I did enjoy reading this. The sense of mystery really captures the readers' attention. Well done.
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~juniorel Apr 6, 2012   Writer
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D
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*sleyf Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi,
It gives me great pleasure to tell you that this piece was featured in our Weekly Round-up

Thanks so much for writing it.
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~juniorel Mar 12, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much!
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